by sr71plt
You captured both the era and the place, and gave us a fascinating set of characters. Very nicely done.
Expertly woven with silken threads
From the warp of personal passion
And the weft of social commentary.
As always, you write very well, and this is a superbly done piece. Good Luck
I really like your work, and like a good wine, it gets better with time!
Good luck in the contest,
Maharat
Your words captivated me. The story was beautifully written and well told. I very much enjoyed it.
and well-written story. I also liked the twist at the end.
I always enjoy historical pieces, and this one was an interesting glimpse into the values and mores of post-civil war America. Well done.