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Carolyn stopped and got out, breathless. She felt the wind immediately take her hair and send it streaming. She scanned the ocean for signs of whales amidst those glittering lights but saw nothing. But she knew they were there.
- COMMENTS
LisbethElliotover 10 years agoI love your way with words. They slide over me, as the wind did to Caroline, touching, seducing, demanding my pleasure. And they always hit their mark. Even stories that are not normally my "cup of tea", as this one, draw me in and hold me captive in the hands of the Master. As always, Doctor, you do not disappoint.
sopharoonesover 10 years agolike seriously, the erotic part and the non erotic part are written equally as well and compelling. love it. this story is amazing, the whole backstory and research you must have done (yes?) and the imagery of this desolate place set to become the next "big thing" in tourism and how western culture just will never get it. I only gave it 4stars tho coz i got to page 6 and i was thats it!? lol but that was it, sadly. :) Otherwise couldnt have enjoyed it more
Anonymousover 10 years agoSeems more like a crack-induced horror movie than erotic coupling, where evil rapist winds track down and impregnate women with demonic wind babies or some equally weird shit. Don't get me wrong; you've done an amazing job... except that what you did was create an utterly bleak and barren wasteland, a women who is the next best thing to a coke-whore cheating on her boyfriend and being cheated on in return, and a basically empty vessel of a person who isn't any more full when being raped by demonic wind creatures. The sex scenes had elements of eroticism in them, but they're completely overshadowed by bleakness.
If this were in Erotic Horror, I'd call it five stars, but it looks like you were going for and intended something completely different here and didn't achieve it. Bleak enough to be something darker, but too bleak to be likeable.
