All Comments on 'Patches of Ice'

You're getting really good at this "Ice" series, Mugsy. Even without the hockey theme, I'd enjoy it, simply because you're a wonderful writer. Thanks for a sequel. What's next?

Great. Now find someone for Hilary... :)

I love all your ice stories. Do continue with the story.

That was my happy noise* lol

I just got home, saw the update , and got so excited that I dropped everything on my bed and sat dow nto read!

I loved it! You're a great writer!

I can't wait to see if you continue one of these stories or start another one! Either way, I'm hooked!

I don't even like hockey but I love these stories! Well done!

I absolutely LOVE this series. I love how you make the players so human and give the women real insecurities when dating a hockey player. You're a fantastic writer. Please keep them coming!

peed myself when I read this story. Such crap! Do you have no shame? I will ask Santa to leave a turd in your stocking, and maybe ask him to wipe his ass on your tablecloth before he leaves for the next stop. Have a Merry Christmas.

I am in love with your stories about hockey! I think they are amazing even if the romance is a little rushed sometimes! I think it just further adds to the appeal! Plus who can resist a little hockey and a lot of love!

I read the Hilary/Mark series before this one, but I think I like Anatoli/Lena's story even better. Maybe I just resent this Hilary character for her interference! It's a very cute story, and I loved how she left Moscow early to be back with Anatoli. I'd love it if you could do another installment for these two characters, maybe have the chapter where Anatoli asks her to live with him, like you suggested might happen in the Hilary/Mark story. If not, just keep up the good work with your other stories. I don't even know much about hockey at all, really, but I love these stories with the hockey heroes who literally sweep these girls off their feet! One suggestion I have is that you repeat the phrase "you're killing me" in almost all your stories, the eye color is mentioned constantly, and the females seem to blush a whole helluva lot.

Pay no attention to the person who said this was "crap" who didn't even have any coherent criticism!

It was once again a good story. I wish it had more chapters (things tend to feel rushed in only one) because it was so good! However... Hilary was definitely the first character in your stories to ever actually irritate me. I was actually glad when Lena snapped at her.

I first read about Lena and Obie in PennLady's Numbers and loved her there, I'm happy that I was able to find your work and read Lena's story. All your work that I have read has been amazing and I plan to continue reading. Thank you.

i loved it! you should continue writing, all your stories are good.

8. Ice Hockey 101 (JS and Rebecca):

http://www.literotica.com/s/ice-hockey-101-ch-01

I never knew hockey could be so sexy :)

Hmmm I might have to get into hockey if the players are this sexy

Great story, as always!

Seeing as this is in Romance, I think it would've been to have seen some communication about what each of them were worried about instead of always making up with sex ... As hot as it might be, it doesn't make a real relationship...

Still haven't talked to each other about their concerns

A good story, although at first I did not like Hillary's reaction to Anatoli, but then I saw that the motives were to protect Lena.

I must say that when I said that I was getting married, all my friends told me that I was crazy, that since I married a girl so young and that we had met very recently, they told me that it would never work. I left those "friends" out of my life and got married. Of that almost 38 years ago, I am still with my wife and those "friends" have all divorced ..., I was told.

Outside of this comment, I loved the story, and I wish there were a sequel, with the names linked, to make it easier to locate the continuation ...

5* for you.

I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.

They didn't deal with any of their issues. It was more about sex. Wasn't that great a romantic story really

I unfortunately read your stories out of order; therefore although this was sex, sex, orgasm & more sex, I know where these two end up! Still gave it 5 stars!

WAUW !

Thanks for sharing ;-)

Thank you for the sequel! I like the steamy scenes. Hillary was rather annoying and overprotective and nearly ruined everything for the main characters, but I'm glad it ended well.

I enjoyed the story. I would have enjoyed it better with more verbal interaction. I would like to see the relationship grow more.