All Comments on 'Pathways Ch. 01-02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Don't you ever sleep?

I just finished your "Life on Another Planet" story, which was highly enjoyable. And now this. You keep churning out story after wonderful story...and I don't know how you do it. Cheers!

arrowglassarrowglassover 6 years ago
As always, an interesting start!

The hook is set...waiting to be reeled in!

bruce22bruce22over 6 years ago
Excellent opening

I am in love with Deb and rooting for our hero.. That business of rubbing up against him with her breast, but the I went to all male university fifty years ago.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Every woman I know would call having her make the decision a fear to make a decision. Asking is ok, but, surprising her is better. Respectfully confident with out being arrogant, add mystery and fun. That is what women desire, regardless what they say. Lol!

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