All Comments on 'Patience in Cape Verde'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
work in progress

A great story - terrific potential for development

SadieRoseSadieRoseover 15 years ago
Wonderful, passionate stuff!

I love the slow build of this story and the gradual erosion of will of the narrator. The climactic surrender to his hidden desires is mouthwatering and I can't wait for Stefan to arrive.

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Former SR71 pilot, currently professional writer and book editor; writes under name "habu" on other erotica sites. My erotica books can be found under the author name habu or Dirk Hessian (and coauthored books with Sabb under the names Shabbu or Stephen Kessel) at S...