All Comments on 'Patience Pays Off'

Yes, more!

Bravo

BUENA PUTA. mas lenceria. segui asi

Happy to see you writing again. Please continue to write. Love the few stories you have posted.

Another great one Linda. Can’t wait for part 2.

such a great story!, would love to see more of your work

Truly outstanding… love your stories!

What a wonderfully written story, so we'll paced and sensual. Cannot wait for the next part

Fantastic story in Linda's highly charged erotic style. My favorite writer here and can't wait for the next segment.

Great story....great writing as well. Hope to see more from you. It is a treat to see well written, realistic stories written here.

Excited for more

Set the tone for normal son still infatuated with mom to have a chance. Great storyline of two attractive people seizing the moment. Actually one of best in so many ways.

And we got a winner! Excellent buildup and I look forward to more. 5 stars

So fucking hot! Can't wait until the next chapter!! Five stars and a favorite point!

Outstanding !!!!!

TOO graphic a description of the FACIAL during the first contact, real or imaginary.

Somehow you are all influenced by the So Cal based porn industry! This is a MS story after all.

Great story and good to see you writing on here again..

one of my favorite stories this really hit home for me, I worked on my mom for months.

oh 5 stars for me also, please add to this can't wait to read more, promise u will, lol

awesome story, can hardly wait for the second installment

Incredibly hot story; hopefully part 2 posts soon!

Just a outstanding story. Great job writing it. Can't wait for the rest of the story to post.

You tell a good story.

Will willingly wait for more. An awesome start. I hope you can keep it going.

Thanks for sharing.

Well done! Interesting how you showed that the most erogenous part of a woman is her mind.

Which church did she attend regularly? "sorrowful virgin"? that advocates running around in bra and panties to spiritually elevate the MS relationship!!! I will take half a dozen of those mothers to go. LMAO!

That was great! 5 Stars. Please continue.

Great story keep the magic going good writing.

Who is seducing whom????????

Well written...BUT...

Something about Patrick's scheming made him come across more as a perv than loving (but horney) son. Perhaps you outlined his motives a bit too completely?

Perhaps some humor would help...him coming across as being a bit conflicted and appreciating the humor or oddness in the situation as opposed to cold blooded plotting.

Wonderful,,,,loved it

Love love it!! Waiting for more, Plzzzzzzz

5 stars

Great story, hope this means you will write more story’s

can't wait for the next part!!!!

Pretty good. Great lead up to them getting it on, but then your word choices seemed to get too limited. Maybe it’s just me, but I don’t like to see the same action verbs used over and over.

Great job on the story, I loved it. The build up to the dam bursting is sweet and hot!

nice build-up, love the suspense.

Waiting for the next chapter...

Please keep writing. You have the rare gift of engaging my emotions and, at the same time creating believable characters who almost jump off the written page directly onto my libido.

I suspect that your stories are based on reality, and that makes them even more exciting.

Please keep writing and turning me on.

Excellent writing and build up. More authors should write as well as you.

Definitely needs continuation.

Excellent You are such a talented writer

One of the best erotic stories I have ever read

I loved the story and will enjoy reading many times! I really enjoy how you describe and develop her feelings and how her initial resistance breaks down. Love your writing, it feels so true. Now, off to enjoy the next chapter!

Linda you've done it again. I am so grateful you've decided to start writing again after the long break with Linda's Discovery. I love that you were able to take your friend's vision, experience and desire and bring it to life in such vivid detail for the rest of us.

As you know from our email exchange, I've had an unbearable desire for my own mother's panties, and really everything that comes with them. Even now at my age of 51 I'm obsessed, but have never had the courage that you and your subjects have to confront those fantasies and bring some form of reality to them.

Thank you, thank you, thank you!

Please keep writing about mothers and sons (and panties!!)

It's always nice when a plan comes together, lol. Ashley and Patrick weren't the only ones that were leaking and making a mess in their panties. I was never a mother fucker, but not for lack of wishing, it just was never to be. I did however use her panties whenever I could. I was just too afraid to cum into them and leave a message. Actually still have two pair of her panties that I keep as a special reminder. Oh well, one very hot MF story, thanks.

I love these types of stories. Very well written and I can visualize every single detail..... W O W !!

Loved the story your writing with the great details and build up is awesome

Your writing is phenomenal! Thank you so very much.

Patience certainly pays off - for the reader. Wonderful story. Loved the way you built up the tension.

This was so great. A very exciting read and so well written.

Wow.

That was some excellent story telling.