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All Comments on 'Patty's Eyes Pt. 02'

by BigMadStork

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Ducky7Ducky7almost 6 years ago
Hot and loving story

Only if real life could be this loving....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Typo....

This has been a fun story and fun to read with exception of a recurring typo. You keep using the word 'their' when it should be 'they're'. They mean totally different things. Other than that, this is well written.

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Yes, it's been a while since I published. I had a bit of a writer's funk and have survived. I just published a short story (for me), and more will follow.

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