All Comments on 'Paula's Peas'

Started out ok but with all parties beginning with P it started to get boring for me then stopped reading before the end. Even the author got confused with who she married naming a son instead of her husband in the second paragraph! Too many p's

I thought my English is not so good, but after seeing the review before I realized it was not just me it's also the author

Rope started well

Sorry .... Could not put myself through more than the phirst page before I was phorced to quit reading. I wanted to continue to see if "Paula picked a peck of peckers", but in the end, sanity prevailed and I could not read any more. It seemed she had already had her pick of peckers ...... and pussies .

Too much is like too much of anything. It ends up being the only thing you notice or remember. A dash of hot sauce in your food adds flavor. A glass of hot sauce with your food... Well, you get the idea.

Sounds like a story written by a Polish woman fresh off the boat and that is not a compliment. * for that is the lowest rating I can give.

This reminded me of the old Farkal sketch on "Laugh Inn." It worked on television but not here. The P routine gets old after a couple paragraphs, takes away any potential erotic gratification.

... and procured the purveyor of this piece of pathetic prattle a paltry single star. This was the phirst - and, I pray, phinal phantasy that person will purport to phoist on the people who phrequent these pages!

Please don't post any more.

Gave you a 5

This is the worst piece of drivel I've ever seen. Please get an experienced editor and try to make some sense. I almost am thinking that english isn't your first language.

VOTE 1* FOR EVERY STORY RATED BY THAT TRANNY BITCH FOOL VASTIESMITH2 AKA BONNIETAYLOR2 AKA ANON!

This is for YUK

What do you mean "ALMOST" ?

This is patently pretty plainly PATHETIC. If anyone wants any assistance in getting off of sec forever, just keep reading mjque.

Terrible.

Gave up after a few paragraphs, if you get muddled up with who is who , how the fukc are the readers meant to keep track ?

And the "P" thing ? No sorry its a poor , a very poor attempt to be original.

stopped after the fourth paragraph.

Thought the first paragraph was a joke, then quit after the 2nd. It must have been painful to write.....

P names and then to find out that the men are all bi i stopped reading and will mark your stories as unreadable you should have put that in the intro

I liked the use of the letter P in the story. I also enjoyed the bi sex scenes. Keep writing the way you do because some people do like your writing.

was more than I could stand with all the P names and then it turned GAY, couldn't give it less than one star a -10 would be better, THIS TRUELY SUCKED BIG TIME!!!!

Perfect Piece of Poor Prose.

Piss poor passion

Enjoyable read - consider a follow up piece.

The first page did me in also, and apparently confused the writer as well, who called her husband Percy, then referred to him as Phil. Maybe the take away here is that using an outline as framework to help build the story and maintain it's structure wouldn't be a bad idea for this writer. I'm not going to rate this submission, but to leave a piece of advice I learned in the Army, the 7P's: Proper Prior Planning

Prevents Piss Poor Performance.

I found it hard to complete Queneau's work, and I found it doubly hard to finish yours. This is by no means an insult, you are certainly the better author to even contemplate something like this. It just did not translate well into erotica. Sorry.

When the author puts more effort into alliteration than the story, that is not a good sign.

what a scum of the earth evil whore...