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Click hereThen suddenly her eyes sparked angrily again, "And you'd better survive," she warned him fiercely. "I'm not having you reneging on sorting this."
Mac's mouth quirked, and he bent down to softly kiss her forehead before scooping her up.
"I promise. C'mon, picchu. Let's get you home. Before your guard begin to get suspicious of the weakening scent in your room."
Gemma was worried, suddenly. A lot more rested on their staying apart than she had thought. Like his alliances - and hence his pack's survival, and through them, his.
"But they'll be able to tell I was with you instantly, from the fact that your scent is all over me, won't they?"
Mac nuzzled her nose lovingly as he walked, his breath sending goose bumps over her skin. He was carrying her carefully across the sloping rooftops, and his voice was smiling as he replied, "Why do you think I sent you the rug via official channels, picchu? Of course my musk envelopes you - you've had that rug wrapped around you all night. And we left your window open too - the city smells will confuse them when they first scent you in the morning, making it harder to assess the concentration of my musk on you."
Gemma's mouth quirked. Sneaky wolf. Her sneaky wolf.
"I'll soon wash it off in the shower too," she reminded him, smiling at his cunning.
Mac grimaced in response, mouth and arms tightening in brief, irrational dissatisfaction.
"If you must."
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Merry Christmas all, glad you enjoyed the last two chapters, and thanks so much for all the votes and comments. This chapter was more plot and less sex, apologies. But it won't all be about learning control, don't worry. J
As requested by erinjamison , I include a glossary of wolf words used so far below. Thanks, good plan! Afraid I'm not sticking it at the beginning, because it would become the lines the website would quote on any teasers/ tasters to lure readers in. I'll try to keep it current but please let me know if I've missed any. Except the ones that haven't been explained to Gemma yet, that wouldn't be fair, would it? ;-) S
Alfamme female Alpha
Argen silver alloy which debilitates wolves
Asage mother wolf with young cubs
Chituk territory challenge
Convey send information mind-to-mind, either by words or images/ feelings
Defasio personal, formal challenge
Doft mating scent
Fria formal welcome, denoting peace
Loup what a human calls a wolf (canis lupus);
name used for four-legged form by a wolf
Manu a human
Mordeur the wolf who a werewolf answers to, the one who bit and turned him
Natal litter-brother
Naulu mark of protection
Phys physician, wolf doctor
Piquant battle headache
Picchu little jug of sweetness (personal nickname)
Ruggare young male wolf
Ruhkreis circle of peace for mates during the rut
Shiatz healing coma
Shiele essence, personal strength
Sjeste young female wolf or wolves
Sjestval female's right to leave a mate
Wereem female werewolf
Werewolf human who has been bitten and turned, not born a shapeshifter
Wolf natural born shapeshifter with three forms, human, lycan or wolf;
name used for lycan form by a wolf
I'm rereading this and just wanted to leave this comment from my old self I Didn't stop reading And I'm Glad I didn't it's a Very Good story with lots, and I do mean LOTS of twist and turns But I'm not giving away How But just know Everything DOES Work Out!!! You tell a meeeaaan story young lady. Yes You Do! But I HAD to come rr for Many reasons only one being I was SO EMOTIONAL last/first time I read this I Had to come while I'm in better control of my emotions, I can sit back and glean things I'd not the first reading. Very Good Job!!!
I’m in Total agreement with sofia57 Especially the part about being suicidal if it were me in fact when he declared he’s to marry another, Which I PRAY DOES NOT HAPPEN!!! But when I read that I thought maybe she was going to be made an Alfamme because she tries to kill herself and he heals her! I Think I mean Really Believe you’re trying to kill me here!!! She can not NOT be a wolf Damn It!!! You referred to her as an Alfamme and you Just Put it in the description of it being a Female Alpha! MAKE HER A WOLF!!! PLEASE!!! I was BAWLING 😭 SO HARD I had to stop reading because I couldn’t see through my tears! I SO BADLY want to Look Ahead!!! I’m SO FREAKING HEARTBROKEN!!! I’M Crushed My Spirit’s Positively CRUSHED!!! I’ve not felt in a story like this EVER! And I Greatly Dislike You For This!!! Off I go for More Heartache! I WANT to STOP But I CAN’T!
The added back story/tease was delightful. Easy to follow and each character has their own 'voice'. Though sometimes not all that professional Gemma's internal dialog is awesomely human in its chaos. Recommeded to a few of my friends and 5 stars.
Can't go on. I tried. The writing is decent (ish) but the characters and plot got progressively worse, not better. Gemma is a bi-polar little wretch with very few positive qualities. Self-centered and unpleasant; she is a poor heroine. Mac is alright; but rather a carbon copy of a typical Alpha were, nothing about him or his back story really sets him apart from any other in the majority of stories I've read here. The plot is just all over the place and full of holes, I don't even know where to begin so I won't even start. Gemma's inner dialog is immature, grating and not fun to read, it's very hard to believe that she is a Dr. of any sort. Keep writing, writer... You almost know what you're doing, but you need much more practice.