All Comments on 'Payback'

Anyone who has to use drugs or force on others for sex should be removed from the planet. Great story of revenge.

I enjoyed your story a lot. I hope you do more stories of this type. Waking up in the spot he was in was such a good touch, now that was revenge. I hope he gives her a reason to make him remember her final comment to him, about "...a walk in the park".

xoxoxo

Stefani

Exactly what a rapist deserves. I almost found myself feeling sorry for Barry but then I restrained myself. Keep writing.

I've always had trouble with the idea that this site has what is FAIAP a "rape" category, but I think you've just found a way to justify its existence. The 100 degree rating doesn't even come close to high enough. And it doesn't even come out that Donna undoubtedly knows where Barry lives - sequel possibilities are endless. The best story I've read here in months. Wonderful!

As always your good writing shine through. But I just don't know, this one falls into the SM category for me. As sad assed case as this guy might be, it still seems a little 'over the hill' and the boss's reaction doesn't ring true either. Don't get me wrong though, in real life I would hate for such a guy to go free, but most often that sort of people are more than just one. Yoron.

Take that u gosh darned prickasaurus!!!!! lol

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Great story & fab ending.x