All Comments on 'Paying for College'

by BlondNDesirable

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wdelanderwdelanderover 11 years ago
Very erotic descriptions

I'd love to read more about Lora... hope there's a sequel!

JJgreenvilleJJgreenvilleover 11 years ago
A nice tale, but.................

I think I've read something like this before, perhaps on another story site. Not quite sure though. It does have some of the same elements in the 'other' story though and I'll continue to follow this one to see what happens and perhaps jog my mind so I can remember where I've seen, and read, this before. Thanks for sharing though and looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Love it!

Great details. I'm going into college, and wish I had a deal like that haha (unlike Lora I'm a virgin though, and am blonde with green eyes ). I can't wait until they actually have sex. He's gonna be bossy;)

LSLARRYLSLARRYover 11 years ago

I loved it. I am hoping that there is more to come, I would love to see what happends on their first weekend together in Carolina.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Please continue...

Loved the first chapter, don't keep us waiting too long for more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

sadly she was right she just became a high priced whore. and to agree to go outof the country weith him sounds like a setup to be sold into a sex slave ring where she has no choice.

josephstevensjosephstevensover 11 years ago
Love it!

It is a familiar story line, but you build it well, and your decriptions are brilliant! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Job Wanted

I'm picking up student loans now as I go back for an advanced degree. I wish I could find an ad like this one... but for "non-traditional, married students" He sounds sexy and I could use a sexy adventure that paid the bills! :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
WOW!!!

Agreed,familiar story line, but you do an amazing job of it! 10000/5, can't wait for chapter 2!!!

talldarkfellowtalldarkfellowalmost 11 years ago
Sorry, too unrealistic.

He hands her $6000, has a "cover" business that must cost thousands per non-sex slave student, and promises $80,000 a year for a handful of weekends of sex with an inexperienced coed, whe he could hire a porn star for less than half that amount? Yes, he likes her "freshness", I get that. I'm just not buying this handsome millionaire, which he'd have to be, doesn't know how to surf the internet to find women who'd do it a lot cheaper.

On the plus side, the girl's emotional reactions and the sex scene were pretty well done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Please continue

Please continue this story with additional chapters about the future sessions. Best BJ story ever.

Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
so well written

I think this is one of the best story I've come to read here. Good build-up, and no over used descriptions for the blowjob part... too bad there doesn't seem to be a part 2 on the way because these are 2 great characters.

PreciousKitty82PreciousKitty82about 9 years ago
I Almost Came

If only I were lying down while reading this story. I'm horny as hell; thanks a lot!

Please, PLEASE, write more of this. I would love to experience this adventure through your words.

Sexy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Fantastic!

Exciting to read! He guided her through the blowjob!

Really hot to read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
May We Have More Please

Your writing style and content is excellent. I, like others have written, would love to see more from you especially on this subject. Her transition into submission would be wonderful to read about and could hold us in rapped attention.

damon1951

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
RESPONSE TO talldarkfellow

...who sees it as too much money to pay for too little sex. I thought maybe Mr. Stonebridge was a benefactor who wanted to help needy college students anyway and figured while he was at it he may as well get something out of it for himself. Even so, the $2000 per month spending money seems quite excessive.

Only 4 weekend encounters per year seems too little. But if he has the same deal with 5 other students, that is 24 weekends per year = 2 per month. That would amount to over $2 million per year. However, if he is a billionaire, 2 million is 0.20% of a billion. For comparison, 0.20% of $100,000/year income is $200. One can imagine anything -- it is only fantasy.

It is an interesting plotline/idea and well told, as mentioned in other comments. My problem -- and what keeps this from being a topnotch story -- is that it needs to be carried forward to at least the first weekend encounter at college.

Since it appears that BlondNDesirable may no longer be submitting stories, I wish some other author would carry forward this worthy tale. It might go into Lora's dating/boyfriends, sexual attitude and expertise (is some guy bowled over by her sexual skills gained from her mature mentor?), academic achievement (being freed from money pressures), relation to parents, marital prospects (what does she reveal about her college financing plan?), graduation (Mr. Stonebridge in attendance? How is he introduced to parents and friends?), and epilogue about later life.

Paul in Oklahoma

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Finish

We need all of the rest of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wow

Fantastic hope it has more installments

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