All Comments on 'Paying the Family Debt Ch. 02'

With part two you finished this story. Thanks, it was a fun read. And mom is right. It is about love

this type of love bonds the family in a new and special way

i would love a 3rd

I can see this going on to a part three or a new storyline after this one with them in it.

Please keep writing you have a great talent that should be shared. If your like me your sexual interests, fetishes and quirks vary, so I would like to see what else your delightful mind can dream up. Thank you for sharing this sexy sweet story and to me they moved in together shortly after to save money and further this new love!

Enjoyed the developement, background, and the flow of the story. You put it in everyday terms and made it personal. You could feel the love between them.

Thank you. Please write more.

id love to read about her brother walking in on them. then they make plan to seduce him.

writing a sequel to this sequel?

This is one of the hottest stories I have read on literotica. I think that I wish there was a part 3.

However, parts 1&2 were so good. This was one of your best. Thank you so much.

Very well written also. Very hot ! BRAVO !!!

Your writings are the best-written, most outrageously sexy, greatest orgasm-inducing stories I’ve ever read.

Thank you.

You inspire me to write some of my own.

<3

Descend to Drift

So I had an idea. You are obviously into incest and also into shemales. What if you were to write a chapter 3 of this that takes place 3 years later where Greg is 18 and is transitioning/has transitioned into a girl, and he catches his mother and sister, possibly joining in on it?

I'm glad that you made the mother and daughter fall in love. Liked that the mother and daughter didn't listen to social norms and loved each other any way. Now they can mix work and play. I find it's the extra bit of naughtiness your stories always bring. Clap clap clap

I loved it. Thank you.