All Comments on 'Penetrating the Family'

That was a plot twist I never saw coming. I'm impressed by the very original story line. I want to read more about this interesting family...............

Very good story. A very inventive plot with a plot twist that would grab O'Henry's notice!

just excellent!! i love this tale!! so much fun to read!! more, like this, please!!!!!!

Devious Mind working! This is going to be Great if it continues. Thanks.

wow so didn't expect the twist at the end, very well done

thank you for sharing

That was quite the ending. Julia was pretty nasty, and not in a naughty way. 5*

I f you haven't thought about it, you should write a sequel

Off the track crazy, but an intriguing story. There is so much potential for more stories here! Anyway, interesting story.