by KaceyLoveington
What a great start to what may be one hell of a good series. But you left me hanging, so I held back at 4 stars instead of the full 5 star rating.
Great to see you taking it slow. Will be waiting for ch 2 of this one. 5*
Awesome start! Loved the slow start and where this is going. Think it could be a great series. Can’t wait for chapter 2. 5 stars to you.
Thanks for the feedback.
Chapter 2 has been submitted, hopefully it will be up in a couple of days. My plan is to write at least one Chapter per week, but sometimes 2 when I have the extra time.
Enjoy
Super hot intro and scene setting. Love to get more detail on Zoe. How she dresses, hair makeup, tits, feet and nail polish and how she starts dressing up for the college stud and his father. She is destined to become their BBC slut! Keep up the good work.
The set up was very compact, and if that's what you intended. I look forward to chatting. 2. I am a woman btw