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Click hereThey both seemed surprised by my comment. And I was too. I didn't encourage that sort of personalized treatment of the work place.
"Just remember it's for a law office."
I was about to go back to my office when Margo stopped me.
"Megan, are you... um... dating her?"
I looked from one to the other for a second.
I said, "I wish it were that simple."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 7 years agoNo, there is nothing simple about it, except for the love part, but then again, that's the most complicated simple thing in the universe :/
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VirginiaMarieAndrewsalmost 8 years agoAuthorIf they don't work for you, so be it. While A similar pet play / love story could well have been written without those elements. But that would not have been THIS story, in which they are part of the plot. They become even more important in parts seven and eight.
Ib_Saysalmost 8 years agoI don't really like the fantasy elements, it simply adds nothing to the core story aside from serving as a distraction, it feels out of place, this story doesn't really feel an urban fantasy story because there is so little background about it, nothing of significance about the how or why people have special abilities, or what influence it has on society.
Mind you, I'm an avid fantasy reader, I just think it was the wrong decision to add fantasy elements to this story, since it has absolutely nothing to do with the core story except adding some possible emotional shortcuts for Megan, that she seems to shy away from so they end up not mattering at all, the story could have progressed exactly the same without her abilities.
