All Comments on 'Perspiration'

by bassbelly

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great beginning.

Great start, I hope you will continue writing this story for a couple more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I agree.

You should continue this story. It is too good to not have a second chapter or three.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
More please.

I loved reading this story. Please write more chapters to it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Yes More.

Don't write anything else until you finish this story. It is Too Good to be left unfinished.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
must be a lot of vigins here

this was subpar at best the other readers must be a bunch of virgins if they think it was great. as usual the story is unfinished this writer has never finished a story yet.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
a hickey?

so irv is 13?

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