by kitschx
First to the other comment. Why did you bother reading the story if it's not your thing. It's clearly labeled BDSM. Why not just go past it instead of leaving negative comments.
Now to the good part. I liked it. I would have liked a bit more background on the two main characters - like how did they get into this D/s relationship. Maybe that could be part of a second chapter when either one reflects on how they got to that point in their relationship.
Thanks for writing the story