by eeric
If your happy with the story, then I'm happy for you, but I couldn't give you a high score. sorry
"And then it hit me, she could get pregnant. Sean could have knocked her up there in front of me and I just let it happen."
Wow he's not very bright is he and apparently he also doesn't own a gun
Come on Eeric, you can do much better, this story lacks tension and is so, so predictable and the characters are weak! it has great potential, it just needs the meat & taters beefed up! grade: "D"
A loser and a slut married. What a combo. Enjoy your dysfunctional life together.
Is it possible to give a zero here. A one it too high.
what a fucking asshole ,what the fuck is wrong with you , you need some one to kick your ball up to your mouth ass hole...........................................................................................................