All Comments on 'Pharaoh’s Curse Pt. 05'

love how you are tying some of your other stories together with this one. can't wait for more of this story

Love the tie-in to Porn Star Family. Keep up the great work.

another great chapter

Great as always now we get to wait on the andrew/ira/Samuel axis of additive

Don't pile on more stuff like aliens or such, Atlantis can be a fun excursion.

But don't go history channel ancient aliens on us readers, you have a great story going.

And the Interactions with the gods are fun, they aren't stuffy and full of themselves.

Really looking forward towards the next chapter..

Enjoying the series very much the tie in to "Porn Star Family" and "Family Secrets" I was not expecting but it is a nice twist. Keep going

Great story - great chapter. Looks like you've done a lot of research.

Really should have seen the tie in coming but totally didn't. Well done. This is as enjoyable as your other works. Cheers!

loved this chapter and it's opening connection to the other two series I look forward to seeing where it goes as you have a talent for crossovers and spinoff stories

This great chalet to sign already brilliant read. Love the cross over with PSF. Look forward to the next chapter.

Incredible tale so far - probably one of your best, and that's saying a lot. If I had one request, I would like to see more exploring of Andrew's feelings about the women around him. You've "toyed" with it in passing, but you can't be having intimacy on a continuing basis with women without a bond forming. Other plot lines I'm wondering about - Is his mom still able to have kids? (I think working out the story math she's in her early-mid 40s, so getting close to her ability to get pregnant.) Who does he really want as his "earthly" Queen since he continues to fight his mother being it? Again, very engrossing story - can't wait for more! 5*

Terrific chapter, love the tie ins!

Great story

keep going love this story

Nice that you combined this with your porn star family one

just love this story keep it coming...

I am really enjoying this story. I like the plots and subplots as much as I like all the sex. I hope you can continue until they get to the dig at least if not longer.

Thank You

A wonderfully written addition to this story. Thank you for sharing it with us!

Love this story , your intricate weaving of historical facts with your storyline proves once again, that you are a Master Storyteller. I hope you continue with the series.

Hope you write more soon as it was a fantastic story so far

love the story whens the next pharoh one coming out...

I just love this story. Cannot wait for the next chapter

5/5

Brilliant, like the way your bringing different storys together. Hope to be able to read more very soon..

Loved the entire Pharoah's curse series so far. Waiting for you to publish the next chapter. I believe this has potential to form a proper book series. Can't wait to find out about ma'at, the atlantis tie in as well as connections between the Egyptian deities and christian side of things. Two major religions colliding.....

more more more more!!!!!!!!!! PLEASEEEEEE

Please continue this story. It's awesome and I can't wait to read more.

Love this series please keep writing

Well, you can talk to your friend inside; that woman is looking for you," Wilma said, smiling motherly at her stepson, not even looking at the boy beside him.

Atleast Wilma doesnt even look at Ira while

Alex was all touchy with him. I wish Wilma was his queen but yeah she pairs up good with Julian. She is the best character always on the lookout for her boys interest. Cooking and cleaning and satisfying them both whenever possible. Best girl. Unlike Alex always on about uncovering Andys secrets and doubting him all the time.

"You think I wanted to be mixed up in all of this?! Not likely," he muttered, running his hand through his hair. "But, apparently, I am Pharaoh, and with it comes all this bloody weirdness." Why not likeit? He has women, money, adventure, goddess companion, blessings.. he should be happy.

"Because, if you did, you wouldn't feel my pussy around your cock for two months," Carla said, with a stern voice, to which Alex and Anta nodded along. They do realize he can get any pussy he wants? Theyre used by abasi pussy is not that special.

Absolutely amazing, I hope you continue with this story because it kept me reading with interest. I put your profile in my following file so I can check to see more of this story.

Love the story any idea when next part will be released?

please do the next part i really love this one

Love this story. When will you be putting out the rest of it.

Wow! It is so hard to keep the continuity between real and the history of Egypt. The characters were very well defined and made into people one would like to know. Hope you keep this story going!

5 stars can’t wait to see what happens in London and yes I fully understand that Alex is a 32C

Still waiting for the next part. When is it likely to be released.

I don't want this story to end, I am enjoying it so much

Definitely looking for a next chapter. This is great.

This story is amazing. I don't even care about the sexy times all that much.

Wonder if you got some of the inspiration from Kane Chronicles by Riordan

All your stories are great but this is my favourite hope to see more soon. I've already read this four times.

Love this story. To be honest it seems like it could be made into an HBO late night TV show and it would be a hell of a watch. Can't wait till more chapters come out

Don't skip over the sex scenes

Okay this is my third time reading this and I’m hoping you plan to add more to this. It’s just to good a story to stop here.

I do hope there is more to this story.

God this is a great story. It could go on forever.

Excellent story so far, my only critique would be that with 500 million +in the bank he would be flying private. Even if Andrew was too young and inexperienced to think of that, his father was not.

Besides being such a great story. I'm learning a lot of new vocabulary.

Great story so far, and I can't wait to continue, but I do find it confusing when the story suddenly kicks over to a totally different happening with no real lead-in to it, or explanation of the change. Other than that, the only thing get me is the fact that I feel sorry for Andy... seems that no one in the entire story so far actually loves him for him... not even Alexandrea his mother. Everyone just wants his manhood, and are demanding of it. Step-mother seems more like a gold digger than anything else too. I'm hoping someone starts loving him for himself at some point.

Great story so far. But why are we jumping to Antalantis now? I'm sure there are many more mysteries in Egypt to be solved. Anyway looking forward eagerly for the next chapter. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️