All Comments on 'Phoenix Rising'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Wonderful

For me a very grand story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Wonderfully well written

Great story. Fantastic build up, great attention to detail, superbly well written- what’s not to like!

BrazenpeachBrazenpeachover 5 years ago
Always fabulous!

As always you make me smile, cry and totally enjoy your stories! Loved it!

legsfeettoeslegsfeettoesover 5 years ago
How?

How could anyone rate this anything other than 5 stars? You write so well. You know how to tell a story! I really loved this. Thanks for writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Very nice story 5 stars

But she is WAY to old for him. I prefer an older woman story to at least be child bearing age. I don't read fantasy (for us older guys) older men stories. It does depend on the spread, but older men get slapped in the face when reality happens. They need a pill and wifey needs a younger man...

SoazoldmanSoazoldmanover 5 years ago
Nice story

Very good background. Women in their 50s are very passionate sexually. Great writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Well written, but...

It is a well-written, imaginative piece of erotica, but as someone who has worked in the medical field for many years, I had real trouble getting aroused, reading about a young man so willing to violate the ethics of his profession. Should anyone— say, one of Meg’s jealous competitors— report their relationship to the State Board, he would lose his license to practice in a heartbeat.

If he doesn’t care about the ethics of his profession, will his personal ethics be any better?

WaxPhilosophicWaxPhilosophicalmost 5 years ago
Very nice!

This story took me outside my usual genre, but it still has all the elements that make a great romance. Five stars all the way.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A well written story. But I think it is totally based on a false premise.

Given Meg's negative frame of mind I cannot see her yielding to pressure from the hospital and her friends about having to remain in hospital or being forced to take Will with her against her wishes.

I know that you can easily discharge your own self from hospital providing you sign a waiver of responsibility. In other words your health will be your own responsibility, not the hospitals. Unless your absence from medical care is considered to be immediately life threatening.

Maybe different states/countries have different rules, but I know I signed myself out of hospital after a car accident just so so I could attend my mates drunken 21st party. Yeah. Yeah. I know. Childish huh.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Yes! Very satisfying! I loved the glimpse into these dear people's lives. Thank you so much!

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