All Comments on 'Picking up a Hitchhiker'

Well written, realistic and enjoyable story. Loved the last plunge and the image of the hot seed pumping into his ass......

Going to check out your other stories cause i loved tbe cruelty of this one!

will there a part 2?

It was good until the boy was locked in the floor. That’s too creepy.

No truck exists with a compartment under the floor .other wise a good story

Not many write about a cruel act like this- it's a good read for those who want to be on either position as it's descriptive of both parts.

You really need to get a proofreader because this was painful to read. Errors all over the place, typos, missing punctuation, improper english sentences. I couldn't even focus on the story.

Good read, love you describing his screaming and crying. Reminds me of the great paperbacks available in adult bookstore in 70's

thank u a good story about a long time fantasy of being a toy for an older man

I loved it great story came twice wish it was me.

great storie love it so true of men who drive these artics they love to give cocks as I know as I am a driver and have picked up a few hitchhiker and you can allways no that you get your cocks sucked or me ramming my cock up there love arses

You really must write at least one sequel!

I would have preferred a reluctance version wherein the trucker subdues the youngster, fucks him & sucks his dick in the process. The trucker than shares his food with him, & gives him enough money to continue the travel on his own, but offers him to stay in his truck for several days and nights. The youngster admits to having been bi curious & wants to stay a bit longer.

In above scenario, I would identified with the young hitchhiker.

Would kill for a follow up, maybe a second chapter from the boys side 😍 too hot

Loved your story

Too criminal in thought, the idea is very creepy and isn't at all erotic. Plain and simple it's rape, forced confinement geared towards a sadistic desire to dominate and cause fear. It would be better presented as a role play story. The desire to experience the man scent underwear over face, be restrained and "forced" into gay sex in a role play is far more erotic knowing both parties are horny for this to start with. This approach would provide erotic relief to both parties just as well without the criminality of the way the actual story unfolded. Obviously by the comments the role play angle would also turn on many of the readers as well.

as a cock devoted pain slut i am delighted

shut up. this one is hot as hell