All Comments on 'Picture This: The Farewell'

by Belle_in_south

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redlion75redlion75over 9 years ago

the title sounds like a break up or something not the start of something

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More!

Would love to hear more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
The Farewell

What a great title! A farewell to one relationship as friends in order to welcome the new relationship as lovers. Wonderful story line and great characters. I HOPE there is more to this story.

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uover 9 years ago

As one of my drag queen brothers would say, "Fierce!!" I loved it. Stories like these are happening to people all over the world where they're friends for years and suddenly find themselves IN love. It only takes a catalyst to catapult the relationship to something more. Tho this has never happened to me, I would be afraid it would damage the friendship. To me, it's not worth the risk albeit, she could be my soul mate. But what if she isn't... I would love to see a continuation of this story. Something tells me, Rowan will get hurt or be killed on this next assignment, just as Rowan & Caroline are finding love:( Belle_in_South, take it away and weave your literary magic for part 2 thanks for the good read

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More please!

I have never posted a comment before but felt compelled that this story could be such a great series. Please continue this story. It was sweet and sensual at the same time. Well done!

EmilyAlexanderEmilyAlexanderover 9 years ago
Gorgeous.

Loved it. Xxxxxxx

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
perfect

love it!thanks for such beautiful words

janny54janny54over 9 years ago
beautiful story

a wonderful story with more to be told, I hope. very well written. you never know what can happen with very close long term friendships. thank you for sharing.

luvandluckluvandluckabout 8 years ago

Please write more! I hope if u do rowan doesnt end up dying and their relationship lasts forever. Id like to know if caro's older daughter did know about their relationship and what she thinks. Theres so many good directions their relationship can go and more sex would be great too! Thanks for your great stories!

ImNIndyImNIndyalmost 8 years ago
hat she said

I think what loveandluck thinks.

AnyMooseAnyMooseover 6 years ago
"Picture This: The Reunion"?

Waiting for the sequel...

Thumper3340Thumper3340about 5 years ago
Why is there no chapter 2

I’ve read this story a couple of times and I am still waiting for you to continue this story. I would love to find out how much more their relationship develops, how the kids take it and everything else that goes with it. Definitely 5🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

What a great story. Very romantic and heartfelt. Thanks for sharing it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

One of my favorites.

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