All Comments on 'Pining for Madison'

To be a teenager in love. Thanks for sharing your great story. Cheers. Frankie

Great story. Would love to see a follow up where they go from here. Do they manage to make it thru college together or separate how do they turn out? It would be interesting thank you

I am working on a direct follow up, hopefully will be finished soon. Might be a trilogy, who knows. Watch this space.

I think this was the best story I have ever read

Having been there myself, the emotions were right on. I enjoyed the memories it provoked!

5 Stars! There has GOT to be more to this story...... The emotions covered here are SPOT-ON with those I had on a crush a long time ago.

The interplay and humour make Madison and Ad come alive. Awkward but beguiling. An excellent start to a story of hopefully many parts. Nice when they seem like equals.

Excellent story that is well written and great character development. It also presented itself as very realistic.

Really enjoyed reading that!! Wish there was a part 2

Fear not, Part 2 is nearly done and I’m also creating the plot outline for Part 3.

Gym/health class helped me to find a regular sex partner when I was in highschool. I had sex before then but a girl who I had been friends with for ten years or so hadn't. She mentioned during sex ed part of class that it was a shame she hadn't been laid yet and I said well I can take care of that. I did for the next two years before I moved away. I'm not sure that anyone other than her little sister suspected anything. She did give me hell for not getting with her earlier since we were neighbors and had hung out a lot before then. Thanks for the story and the reminder of good times

The second story in the Pining for Madison series is out now. It’s called ‘Pining for Madison: The Favour’. Hope you enjoy it and thanks for reading.

As a parent my first reaction was “is her dad a complete moron?” But then again, at 18, maybe he was intentionally doing a “iyou kids behave, oh if you need me I will be in the basement using power tools with hearing proportion on for the next 1 hour and 45 minutes and WILL NOT come upstairs before then” a theory supported by the convenient going out of town two days later.