All Comments on 'Bound 01: Pinned'

I loved this story! Hope there will be a sequel.

This is beautiful! There's a side of BDSM that so few authors ever explore, the soft cuddly domination side. The side where you just obey because Mistress is happy when you do, the playful and joyful side. It doesn't have to be pain and tears and humiliation and degradation.

Great story, and well written.

I would like to read more

Really excellent, it felt believable, ad it was well written

Loved this. Can't wait to see what happens in ch 2

F/F does nothing for me personally. I decided to read this based on previous comments. I found it very enjoyable. The softer and supportive side of bdsm generally gets overrun by the humiliation and torture porn, unfortunately. Every story with a more positive framework is welcome and precious. I look forward to future chapters.

It's not often I see such sweet and cute BDSM stories on this site, but when I see it I love it. Add on to that the skilled prose of the author and I'm hooked. I'd love to read more of their story :) Keep up the good work.

5/5 stars

like the title said i absolutly loved it and cant wait for a next part :-)

Thank you for sharing. Very well written. April's change felt a bit abrupt. One other nit. "Principal" instead of "principle." 5 stars. More please.

The intro warned about a lack of hardcore content. I guess the story lacks violence, but I'd say there is plenty of Dominance and submission. Looking forward to more.

Enjoyed this immensely. Great job of depicting internal and external feelings.

Well done if this is your first effort. I look forward to your next! 5 stars.

Great work, you show promise. I look forward to your next writing...

Im no writer, but I do know this was truly hot! Not everyone is into the hardcore punishment. My favorite parts are the way she takes care of her little one

I'd ask for more, but... If you stoped here, you already make me happy with this really well written short story. (5 stars)

Please. I'm literally begging you for more. This is amazing

I really liked the way the story unfolds and the relationship grows. I look forward to more.

Please make more of this, the Domme is literally one of the hottest characters in existence, and I want more of her, same with the slutty subbe, she's really relatable. I do have a small request that you don't add any guys into this story though, the lesbian aspect of this is top notch and I kind of wish for more of that.

The best story I've read on here in ages. So hot, so relatable, as a sub it had me squirming I loved it so much. April was just perfect. More from these two please. There's some really interesting and exciting stuff you could do with this group of friends. Keep it all ladies as well, as previous reviewer said.

Patiently waiting for you to post part 2 of this story.

Hot! I’m a guy ... big, athletic, with a submissive streak. My bvds, briefs, whatever you want to call them are soaked with pre-cum .. meaning I’m as wet as she was. Well-written, actions, feelings, etc., described well. I lived it by reading it. My fantasy tonight while self pleasuring will be me in the submissive role with a female or guy playing the top role. Thanks for the arousal!

I’m only bi-curious and OMG that was stunning

Glorious.