by Jasmynn_Brown
Every time I thought I knew where this story was going it twisted off on another tangent. Well written. Loved the analogies and explanations of the driving force for sex and love. I especially enjoyed finding out Randi and Dawna managed to stay true to their husbands and that Ken was true to Dawna. As the story progressed I found myself liking Randi more and more. I also found myself alternating between hating and admiring Dawna as she fought her desire to bed Dan. Well written and thought out stories like this are few and far between. I would like to meet a real life Randi.
Honest to the core, and a reality seldom seen on this site and in this genre.
Great story, compelling, interesting, brilliantly written. Thanks
Though short it looks more like a novel and the illustraritions are just Wow.