All Comments on 'Pisces'

Glad I decided to keep reading. This was amazing.

I'm glad you liked it! I really appreciate the comment and compliment! I'm sorry it didn't catch you right away.

Thank you very much for the comment and the compliment! I'm glad you stuck around for the whole story but I'm sorry it didn't catch you right away.

I was worried this was going to turn into a full shape change, but I appreciate the world you have built!

Dang, bro, that was 100% some of the very best fantasy writing I've seen here on Lit. Seriously, it's really that good. I don't save very many stories in my "Just Wow" folder, but this one definitely goes there.

I have no higher compliment to offer.

I've enjoyed all of your work, but this one was amazingly good. Like wow! I love the world that you built with this one and I wouldn't mind seeing more of it ;) Hope you have a great day!

Almost stopped reading there at the start, but decided I'd see where it went. Glad I stayed, even if it was a little weird. Glad Maddie and Gavin got it sorted out about the coloring and sex of peafowls, even if Victoria is now a peacock with tits and a pussy. The transformation was painstaking but served to paint a vivid picture of what was happening.