All Comments on 'Planet of the Pink Mist'

by DrWeirdnasty

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bobcatu2bobcatu2almost 6 years ago

Are the best Frederick yet getting down to the point detail and description and passion I love it. My email is redtigeru2@gmail.com please email me as to any new stories there are only two here. Love to hear about mom getting fucked and cumming in all holes I can see my cock buried deep in her ass now with the little ass hairs wet and clamping around my cock cuz I shoot in her. Did it many times. Those were the days love your stories please keep in touch. Bobcat U2 hear

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good Novella

You did a good job in your almost Sci-Fi novella. Everything was good apart from some non sense failures of putting a stethoscope in scene in time when they can reverse the aging. Apart from that and a couple of other ones, it was excellent, the action, the description, the tension, the suspense, the mini drama.

Well done my friend I enjoyed reading your work and I'm looking for more.

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