All Comments on 'Platres Conclave Ch. 04'

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Anonymousabout 11 years ago

Some heat

Mostlly gossipy soap opera.

Anonymousabout 11 years ago

Brought The Emotions To Life

Kudos, Sr71plt. This chapter did bring forth Collin's emotions from chapter 3. Personally, I may have taken that lower road and slashed a painting; just to aggravate Nico and Elias. Especially to get the point across to Nico. Lol. But very well thought out progression of the story. Can't wait to read whats next.

sr71plt about 11 years agoAuthor

Thanks

Glad you found Collin redeemed his response to Nico at least somewhat satisfactorily. Trust it wasn't too much of a soap opera for you. *smile* Hope you like the turn chapter 5 (the last) takes.

Anonymousover 4 years ago

WOW

I grew up on Gordan Merrick novels and this is the closest writing to that I've ever cum across. Thank for an outstanding story!

sr71plt over 4 years agoAuthor

Ahh, Gordon Merrick

I appreciate the comparison to Gordon Merrick. I read his novels too.

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