All Comments on 'Play Testers Wanted Pt. 02'

that was awesome, please I need more chapters.

A great read .Thank you again .

Another 5 star chapter.

Axelotto

A new chapter from Lost Boy! Thanks for writing and sharing with us. Good story. Five stars, of course. Write another please, Randi.

It is my opinion that this is an excellent series to continue. The use of several different characters just adds to the overall story. It is my sincere hope that there are several more chapters in this series.

N.D

You have me completely hooked with this offering, I am eagerly awaiting more.

I am going to read your other tales and hope that they are as entrancing.

5/5

I need more of this. Can't wait for this to be continued!

BADA*S

awesome

Really enjoying the story, after reading Iron Rain idk what to expect.

Not a bad start. Since Part 1 and Part 2 are part of the same mission to kill the vampire queen (Snow White), they should be all one part. I don't see why you separated the mission into two parts.

Unusual, really twisted!

Unusual but a decent script. The characters were vast but didn't seem artificially linked. Read like a cohesive story.

Dont know what everyone's on about. The writing seems like it's from a 4 grader.

Its a great story but the powers are developing too quickly and the challenges are too easy for the main character. I also think maybe he should exit the simulation and have some improvement in his real life.