All Comments on 'Play Testers Wanted Pt. 23'

A really good way of drawing in some of your other stories into 1 story. It keeps the other stories moving forward while at the same time keeping them inside the confines of area specific parts of the story. Laying 1 over the other.

And done well.

All of this without answering the question, Is it still part of the game? Is it a game within a game?

Or is it full on real world being used to fashion the game itself?

Maybe that should remain unanswered.

Brilliant as always lost boy once again I cannot stress enough thank you for your time imagination and creativity your effort putting pen to paper and bringing the story to life is yet again greatly appreciated , thank you five stars

Another good chapter. But really waiting for him to return to marvel universe

great as always more, please