by geronimo_appleby
Very nicely done, leading us through the stages of love, the attraction, the wrong assumption, the first sex on the beach and the crushing moment of the errant boyfriends return. Then you tell us he won the prize after all and she is carrying his child.
your well-written descriptions are quite evocative. i liked the 'flowery musings' on the earth rushing through space, and thought they were a nice cosmic foil for the intimate immediacy of falling in love with another life. sex was hot, too. gracias;)