by BrettJ
"Slow down bitch, this isn't a race," Martine commanded, having a bit of fun being in the driver's seat for once. She saw a wide grin cross Julie's face; evidently she was making her daughter happy as well.
Martine = Sabrina the mom?
Makes me wonder two things about the story. One - who did you plagiarize this from. OR Two - how many different times have you written the same story for different sites with different character names?
It's a great story, I loved it, but why don't you finish it? I noticed that a lot of your stories are unfinished..