All Comments on 'Playing House'

This was retarded. The present tense was equally dumb.

I enojoyed this... i found myself getting so wet and actually fingering my pussy because i was turned on

Great story

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Dear God, how did you manage to write such a horrible pile of excrement? People 'DELIBERATELY' writing badly don't write this badly!

Gag!!

TRULY revolting .

Not because of the content or theme but lack of even rudimentary use of spell check or an Editor.

WW

Disgustingly moronic story! Bouncing from character to character E cup tits? You must be a very inexperienced virgin to write this GARBAGE! Please don't write Any more till you hit puberty. 1 star is to many.

DragonRider55

I love it

What insanely stupid comments. Who the hell are these morons and when did they become such grand writers. I enjoyed this story and value it for what it is...purely erotic and sexy fantasy story telling. Thanks for your work, and keep it up !!