All Comments on 'Please Not Like This Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Hot!!

I love your stories!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
your best story

I thought this was your best storie so far, i wish i was her

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Great stories.

Keep the coming!! Please!!

LiterarilyChallengedLiterarilyChallengedover 14 years ago
More?

A very well rounded story. Love it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
NOT BDSM

IT'S RAPE/RELUCTANCE! NOT BDSM IT'S RAPE/RELUCTANCE!NOT BDSM IT'S RAPE/RELUCTANCE! ! NOT BDSM IT'S RAPE/RELUCTANCE ! NOT BDSM IT'S RAPE/RELUCTANCE! NOT BDSM IT'S RAPE/RELUCTANCE ! NOT BDSM IT'S RAPE/RELUCTANCE ! NOT BDSM IT'S RAPE/RELUCTANCE ! NOT BDSM IT'S RAPE/RELUCTANCE ! NOT BDSM IT'S RAPE/RELUCTANCE ! NOT BDSM IT'S RAPE/RELUCTANCE ! NOT BDSM IT'S RAPE/RELUCTANCE ! NOT BDSM IT'S RAPE/RELUCTANCE You get it?! NOT BDSM IT'S RAPE/RELUCTANCE!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I was a bit disappointed by this chapter. I didn't like that she left him, but I could get past that. What really bothered me was that it seemed almost perfunctory; it felt more like a rushed denouement to a story that was already substantially completed rather than the full story arc that the plot deserved.

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