All Comments on 'Point of View: Mine'

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Ashesh9Ashesh9over 12 years ago
Complicated neuroses !

First of all excellent word-play & usage of terms like fire-face , downface , he domination me, submarine , daddy bear , Cruel Emperor vs. beautiful peasant girl is a common phenomena in third world but probably it's a cruel landlord not an emperor most of the times !

an White American Christian forcing a Taoist yellow-skinned Korean girl to spank ,feminize & dildo-fuck a yellow skinned Buddhist Jap would place the writer in the august company of NeoNazi or Klu Klux Klansmen !!!

You do NOT seem to be a redneck but the implications are Global Warmingly unconscious ,subconscious & suspicious !!!

Also Mahatma Gandhi , Nelson Mandela or Abraham Lincoln are the very few persons under those circumstances who would probably genuinely have shaken Eric's hand !

I have been also humiliated by Koreans laughing @ an Indian entrepreneurs' guts to enter a Trade Fair booth to watch a Korean machine when they sneered he probably can't buy the same !

In my country an upper caste man being dildo -fucked ,feminized or spanked by a Dalit or Harijan girl would probably create a revolution where all ideas of High born idiots lording it over low born geniuses by dint of birth would be thrown into the dust-bin of History but the act should not be witnessed by a White-supremacist , Christian fundamentalist European or American to get the effect right !!!

FaelwinFaelwinabout 10 years ago
Lovely story!

Really got me going.

Can't wait to read more from you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Nowhere near as good as your other submissions

I carried on reading this series as I've really enjoyed your other submissions (particularly The Shot Tower), but I did not think this series was anywhere near as good.

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