All Comments on 'Poison Ivy Ch. 01'

Have no idea what I just read. No sex , No idea of world it is set in , No description of why they are fighting. If this is something from one of your other stories it was just confusing. Was like it started in the middle of a story

I’m hooked! I love Ivy’s strength. The sexual tension is great. Can’t wait for the next installment.

Loving the start

Cannot wait!

I love this! You must continue!

I NEED ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!!!

You're a great writer. I love your world-building. Already really loving Ivy's character. But for the love of god, stop writing such asshole male love interests who automatically have zero respect for women. I understand the appeal of a man who's always in control, but this is a bit much.

I am unsure why people are so conlifcted by the male character. This is non-con / reluctance story, not romance. There is bound to be character development that make him more likable, but for now we get to read about this unique and powerful physical bond between a stubborn woman and an aggressive man.

I love this story so far! Thank you!

I really don't get why people decide to read noncon and then complain that the rapist isn't romantic. If he wasn't an asshole he wouldn't be the main character in a noncon story, would he? It's like buying a slasher flick and getting upset about all the blood!

Hurry, hurry, hurry with chapter 2!

I absolutely love Omega/Alpha stories and I can already tell this is going to be amazing. The comments of a unlikable guy and not knowing what's going on us because they don't seem to know how to read. 1) this is non compliance 2) you told people to Google Omega/Alpha if they didn't know what that is.

I think you have a real talent and eagerly await the next chapter in this and your other series

What a strong start to this story, Dare I say, I love this series more than your other one! This is def my style, I love omega/alpha. I love that she’s a fighter and that he’s not afraid to put her in her place! Can’t wait for the next one!!

I love both of your stories, please update both!!

Awesome. I'm also reading the Seeker that is awesome too. Please more ☺

I love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter!

What a great story you wrote! Thank you. I can't wait for the next chapter. In the meantime, I'll go back and read your others.

Please give me more! I need more!!

Oh geez! I want more already!

I was first thinking this was about a cartoon character but I'm so happy I still read it! Please come out with chapter 2 soon!

It makes a world of difference when you place a big bad Dominant as an Alpha set in an Omniverse! It's so much easier to enjoy the dynamic when it's baked right into the storyline. I'm also a big fan of the fated mates theme! I also appreciate that he's not smacking her around as if he cares nothing for her. I'm sorry to say that's why I couldn't read any more of your other book. Hunter knows he bigger, stronger and able to control her without inflicting pain. His role as the genetically dominant mate is meant to protect her...not hurt her. He's been allowed her to strike HIM without retaliating out of anger. See. Non-con doesn't always have to be brutal!

Fist pumping in the air! Yes an Omega Verse story and in the Nonconsent section too! Here’s to hoping the pussies and idiots who read nonconsent but can’t handle nonconsent don’t bother leaving complaints about the nonconsent nature of this story in the nonconsent section!

Also, I love all the fucking cussing!

are you a corpsman?

This was a pretty exciting start. Looking forward to reading the rest of it. And, like a previous commentator said, I like that he's not smacking her around. It's unnecessary.

Does this make anyone else think of Josh Brolin? No? Just me? Ok. Love it, by the way ReckingBall xoxox

In the beginning I thought I would not like this but as I was reading it was getting to be interesting, by the end I like it . Excellent

JUST A FAN CRITICISM by KC

Fast read but so far so good. Perhaps a bit more details amplifying the physical with the emotions associated would draw the reader further into this sub genre. I want to feel everything she feels. I want to feel all her emotions.. lust, fear, desire, anger, hostility, more confusion, etc..

I want to thank you and I appreciate your talent. Can't wait to read your reaming submissions.

..... to see where this story leads. A strange genre for me, but absorbing and well written.

You have written this soo well!!! It's hot and gripping. The writing is superb. This should be in the top rated stories in Literotica. I am surprised it hasn't got more comments. This should be highly rated. Thank you

I love the dominating, and her fighting it off. Great stuff

he should have fucked her with his hot rod with some forced pussy eating and sucking nipple to break her hymen not fisted her simmilarly in the seeker ven facefucked layla just before her first time dry its not so hot these are the only turnoffs or complaints i have in all

rest all i love your writing

What have you just done?

What the…?

Would give 10 stars if I could.

This is my new favorite thing on this site! Omfg! It’s rare you find something so well written 😭❤️

Wow! This is AMAZING! So well written. It’s both realistic and fantastic at the same time. I love the military aspects- you nailed it. Your veteran experience is obvious. I cannot give your work enough praise. Sexy, exciting, great plot, great characters- I hope you publish this somewhere. I would definitely buy it!

Needle? When did they stop using ampuoles? MUCH faster and easier than needles. And she should have been using morphine on her injured and the alpha should have been using it on 'way back.

Seriously, this is so so good. This will be my 4th time reading it. Best omegaverse story I've read and definitely on my top favorites! Wish it was on kindle

What an amazing start, I'm so looking forward to continue reading. Brilliant idea military alpha! I have quite a few male friends in the military and they definitely have some alpha in them, so this world you have created is very very believable. Absolutely love it! 💞

This is a pretty good example of an Omegaverse story but I have one critique to give. When you have a story set in a fictional nonhuman world and then give one of the characters the nickname “Kentucky”, it takes the reader out of the world you’re trying to build.