All Comments on 'Police Training Ch. 03'

Was the shift from first to third person deliberate?

I really enjoyed all three chapters, looking forward to more. The characters are fun, sexy and interesting. I have noticed I don't often read that many stories by female writers - not proud of this, but it's probably because I like putting myself into the story. But this was so good, I didn't care. If you don't mind a small criticism, it might be less disorienting if you settle on one point of view, or if you change, give us a some kind of indication, like a dotted line. Not the biggest deal, but it's distracting.

i don't see their paths joining...so I really hope you're more creative than me - just sayin...

Love following this story! Can't wait to see where it goes, but I hope it will be a great leap!

Hello,

Some asked about the perspective change midway through the third chapter. Someone said i used to many "I's" in my stories. I obsessed about it for a while and shifted perspective. I apologize for that. I just didn't have the energy to go through the whole story and shift perspective so that matched. I should have stayed with the first person perspective, but that's not what happens with obsessions.

loving it so far