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Click here"Challenge accepted," Pooja replied, and Regis grinned, and finally put her down. Linking her arm with his, she walked toward the Massasoit Community College library. All around them, people stared. Black folks. Brown folks. White folks. The City of Brockton, Massachusetts, definitely has them all, yet Pooja Manochahal and Regis Benton nevertheless stood out among them.
"You're going to like it here," Regis said to Pooja, and he winked at her. The young woman smiled and nodded, her face practically glowing in the late afternoon sunlight. As she walked through the Massasoit Community College campus with her new beau, Pooja felt a sense of contentment. Life in the United States of America certainly wasn't ideal, and Pooja missed her parents and her beautiful homeland of India dearly, but in this moment, she actually felt happy.
I have mixed feelings about this story (to be transparent I am an Indian man). On one hand, I do enjoy reading BMIF erotica and you’ve certainly written a lot of it. But I feel like this work sort of… fetishizes Pooja’s culture and faith, and not in a good way. Don’t get me wrong, I enjoyed it and I especially liked the playful/romantic interactions she had with Regis, but some of the cultural stuff sort of felt out of place. If you write a sequel, consider spending more attention on Pooja and Regis’s interactions (and to be honest, on the sex lol), and less on the cultural trappings. I think it’d be a stronger work.
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How many 1 star stories in a row does it take for you to get it? Your writing it the worst on this site. You need to quit. You are an awful racist.