All Comments on 'Pool Boy Ch. 06'

When did Alexis lose her cock and get a kitty???

Like story til you confused me.....

Really enjoyed the series. Great imagery and inventive with the driving scene. Almost expected them to be pulled over by Erin & Samantha. Got any plans to do something about the dickwad husbands.

well with friends of olivias in the pd and da offices, the husbands all better end up getting the short end of the stick in this tale i hope.

I've been reading this series for a while. Got to the pizza boy part and came. Wasn't ready for it. Your story was that good.

His recuperation abilities are a bit silly, but a fun part of story. Could have done without pizza guy, but maybe it figures later in story. The dad sounds like a real prick. Moving to next chapters.

Dierdre is a good addition. She and Hunter should have had a long "alone time" without Alexis. The drive home sex scene was foolishly done. Unlikely that the older sister Dierdre is living a celibate life in the city.

Hunter's recuperation ability is the most real part of the story. Mostly a fun read.

I hope your latter stories improve in writing qualities. There are issues in this chapter where Hunter shouldn't know what Dee was thinking and feeling.