by BigZeke13
Well written kept the story moving and put in a little intrigue. Good job.
Could have pushed his ass down the stairs if both hands are full with a heavy ass box. I didnt need the mouth rape.
This series will certainly go places, just please don't let it die like many other stories and series have died with cliffhangers and this one needs to keep going.
I did not like the fact that you let the story stud not do anything to defend Alexis from the mouth rape. Made him look weak.
Hero emasculated primary love interest raped in his face bad guy got away!?!?! I hope it gets better
I take it you've never had a gun pushed against your body by an idiot that has nothing to lose if he pulls the trigger. It tends to make you consider all options in a flash.
Let's think for a second of this scenario.
Hunter is furious that Alexis is forced to suck Ron. Hunter swats at Ron's arm to dislodge the gun. Alexis flinches and bites Ron's cock. Ron's reflexes kick in from being bitten and pulls the trigger. Hunter spends the rest of his life pissing into a bag. Ron dies from blood loss from his dickectomy. Alexis and the rest of the harem search for the rest of their lives to find another 'twice the size of a Mich Ultra' dick with no success. Hunter lives a lonely life and dies even lonelier.
One swat of an arm would deprive us of the rest of the story...
guess you twits have never had a gun pointed at you. I have and you do what you are told...