All Comments on 'Pool Party'

Loved the story.

It is an urban myth that you should not swim for 30/60/120 minutes after a meal. A widely-believed one, but still a myth.

Though I usually go for mom/son stories, I found this story to be hot and sexy. I just skimmed over the peeing part, though, as that would have ruined it for me.

I loved your story... Every bit of it. No comment on any one part because it was all terrific... Thanks!

I absolutely loved this story. It was just perfect. I hope you continue to write more about it. Thanks for such a great story. I always check your page for updates!

Thoroughly enjoyed the story. Very hot.

Wow very hot story hope you add to it to tell the rest of the week and then some.

This an awesome story... please tell more about these sisters & their brother... great job... Love all your stories

I agree with all of these comments. Very, very good story.

What a story! Amazingly sexy, but a lot of fun as well. You are a master at this.

Great story. It got my motor running!

Gina

Having sex with two sisters is so much more taboo - I'd like to see a continuation of this story.

I love it I want some more of it.......there has to be more to it....Hanna wanted her brother up her ass.....maybe once they git goin julia will lay ontop of her sis ass lunged up in the air fingers spreading her ass cheecks and her brother takes turns on thier asses going from one to the other.

I really liked the two suspension arches you put in, making us wait for both in a different, original way. Then finally an explosion of kinkyness... for sure I will be reading more of your works.

Just discovering your stories so not sure if you'll read this. Great story, great pace. The anal came as a bit of a surprise but I wish we could read more of these kinky sisters.

extremely hot story

This story needs cut in half. Most of it could be left out. Just repeat play fights in the pool.

I have to agree with the others...THIS SCREAMS OUT FOR A SEQUEL!!

The story ended well...leaving us readers wondering, exactly where did this go...

Please consider a followup to this, you have fans who would much appreciate it!

Some rimming and more anal please. Piss etc would be a bonus

Enjoyed it immensely. 5 stars 🌟 ❤

Great story. I would have loved to read the next part of the story. ;-p>

Wow! That story started off slow, but it finished very hot. Well done!

Want more!!!!!!!

Yeah, the opportunity has been missed for at least another part to this. A threesome, shower times, all sleeping together, more pool play. Mom and dad both being gone for the week allows plenty of possibilities.

Very hot! Loved it and want to hear more adventures of the three of you!

So hot 🔥

So fucking hot!