All Comments on 'Pool Party; First Time Lesbians'

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jenorma2012jenorma2012over 7 years ago
ok

I gave this 3 stars because it started out to be a good story, however it started going down hill after she put the dog collar on Le, and then took her to her bedroom with her husband there, and what kind of husband stands for his wife openly cheating on him, it does not matter how nice she was afterwords, the dog collar and chain was uncalled for, but this is just my opinion

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Ugh

This was obviously written by a guy... gross

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
You did well.

Commenters are sensitive, left-wing morons who can stand any D/s play between gay men (that's why girls read yaoi at all), but let out brain farts when lesbos like it because it's 'oppressive'.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Whew!

Great build up and I loved the ending. These people who are commenting that it's rape and blah blah blah, it's also not real. If you don't like it don't read it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
pussy juice? pussy cream?

This was just way too excessively PORNY for me!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
i thought this was the lesbian section

Each to their own but that was not a lesbian story, all I ask is that you put your stories in the correct section so it is read by readers who enjoy this kind of story

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Disgraceful

I turned off your story as soon as there was mention of "date rape" pills. Literotica should have banned this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Best Lesbian turn on is a lesbian woman tied to a bed spread eagled and 5 women devour the woman, one on each foot licking and sucking, one on the pussy and 2 on each breast and ear lobe, driving the woman to wonderful multiple squirting orgasms and making the bed all wet.

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