All Comments on 'Poor Simon Ch. 10'

I was hoping you would post tonight. Yeah, yeah, yeah... I stayed up to see lol. I just had to know what was going to happen. And yeah, I got my finger's crossed for... well, as happy an ending as one can have after what Simon has been through. I hope Tony leaves a path of death behind him as he searches for Simon.

LOL.

Excellent chapter, as always. And what is up with that odd silver blue light in one of his eyes??? *grin*

i really dont think your going too fast its a good pace for me like you said this one is short

i really love this story even though dark at times it has me on the edge of my seat and im always checking your page for the next chapter

keep up the good work im really enjoying all of your stories :)

I'm really really loving your story, I cant' wait to read more. I just hope Simon will get a little peace and happiness at the end

awesome stuff! your cliffhangers leave me breathless. can hardly wait for more. thanks :)

sleep deprived......thts so me its good its saturday n i can sleep or do i have to go somewhere n kill the badass guys?

it was short however totally worth reading. i liked this chapter better. cant wait to read more.

n 2 stories at the same time?! feeling lazy again!

sometimes i get tired of writing the same thing, so I am multitasking a little with my 'Shy Jared' series... But according to the views and the votes, that one is far more popular than any of my 'Poor Simon' stories.

Except for 'Poor Simon 05' for some reason, its at 4.75 and all of the other 'Poor Simon' stories are clustered around 4.30ish

Thank you for your comments, we have one chapter and an epilogue left.

I've enjoyed this story. I think it would have been good to tell us how Rogan figured out where to go to find him. I would have liked to see him come back to the room and find simon gone. How did he react? Did he leave the company or did the boss not sanction the kidnapping and want his fish back? It might have been good to include all that. It seems unreasonable to me without it that he'd figure out where to look for hiim unless he somehow knew what airplane they took and found out their flight plan or something. Other than that, I've enjoyed the story and to a certain degree admire that you do let it get dark. If it ended very dark, then i'd not be happy but if it turns around it won't bother me.

I know there are some holes, but i am trying my very hardest to stay with one character for the duration of the story. At the end of the series there will be an epilogue told from Anthony's point of view, and i will try to fill in all of the holes there. As for now, i apologize for all of the minor plot holes.

I hope he catches a break soon :(

Love the story

I would like to tell you I'm enjoying your story, but I'm not sure I am. It's painful! However, I am eagerly awaiting the next installment, and praying for some relief for poor Simon. Keep writing!

Love the story. I actually hope Tony gets Simon for himself in the end. Can't wait to read more.

It is sad but it is intriguing as well and you can't help but feel for both Simon and Anthony... I hope he has already eliminated the Dr and Hanson, you are a great writer you keep the reader enthralled

Pps write something where rains and the doctor get there just desserts. You know like karma is a bitch

Master Anthony the avenging angel! Lol can wait to read the next chapter and find out what he does to these fuckers 😆

Cutting balls teeth: Check. Wire for throat "hugging", check. Sharps of diverse genres: Check. I'll go down but I'm taking you with me, asshole.