All Comments on 'Poppin' Cherries'

by ElizabethSam

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Lovecraft_LoreLovecraft_Lorealmost 3 years ago

5 stars

One problem I noticed. Ticks are commonly thought of as insects, they are actually arachnids.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

What kind of shooter doesn't already have a stockpile of ammo for every gun he owns? LOL

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
wonderful story telling

Told with great flair and feeling, this sixth chapter in the story of Kyle and Elizabeth is exceptional story telling. The only drawback for this reviewer is the anal sex.

LustyScribeLustyScribeover 2 years ago

Great story! I'm enjoying your writing, and thank you for sharing your work. And the anal was well-written; this is how it SHOULD be done, with care, passion and patience.

ElizabethSamElizabethSamover 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you for the feedback LustyScribe - I appreciate the comments.

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