by Sean Renaud
omg i love it! parts of it ofcorse i wouldnt handle well, but over all it was a good...lustful good story! keep writing!
do you know the meaning of non-consent ???? why do you have the woman loving the rape towards the end...how stupid
Non-consent doesn't mean, "Likes it after a few minutes." Aside from that, this wasn't very interesting, and you somehow managed to be a bit more offensive than if you'd just made the leaders of the rape white guys with blackface paint. Hell, I'm surprised that you managed to avoid using racial slurs.