All Comments on 'Prelude To My Birthday'

Cont. with this story..it is great so far..love it..

This is a great story and fantasy! Please continue, I am sure all your readers will want more!

in the first part she says to her dad, "I shave down there because it feels better" In the second part her brother tells her to shave and she says she did not know girls shaved? No real flow to this story. He talks of going shopping which did not need to be mentioned early in the story

please let me know when chapter 2 is ready.......omg.... yes yes yessssssss! dustinthewind_22@yahoo.com

Very hot story.