All Comments on 'Primal Pt. 01'

I've never been much of a fan of BDSM but you did give us fair warning. I was drawn in by memories of the "I Kissed A Girl..." series and the quality of your writing. That certainly hasn't been a let-down. We'll see how this new series progresses.

Raw tumescence; explosive.

Pretty damn awesome. And primal is the correct word for it. This is incendiary levels of hot. Thank you so much for writing it, and please write another chapter

I will be honest I did not finish, as you said "you have been warned" I did read far enough to know that this was/is a fabulous example of what it is. It just wasn't my cup of tea and yet you do know your way with words.

Highly erotic. Five stars. Looking forward to more. Thanks.

Wow! That was intense and very arousing. This is not normally my preferred genre of erotic fiction but I was drawn in almost immediarely and enjoyed every bit of it. Really looking forward to the continuation of this hot, steamy tale.

Mmmmmmmm words escape me

I really liked how you started this story with a detailed encounter between these two women. You haven't lost your touch during your sabbatical.

EGRI

Wow and again wow

Is it suddenly got realy Hot here lol

Anyways I can only say

Welkome back and more please

Like @Maonaigh this is not really my cup of tea. But this is powerful and vivid writing.

Extensive description how to - like a manual - dom sub come together properly and finding some to vent , releasing some steam , and leaving steamy Windows behind

Best part for both snuggling after the rollercoasters ride

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🍀

Wow! So sensual, so compelling. Incredibly well written and plotted. Great as a stand alone story, but these characters have so much potential for depth and complexity.

Wow! I really loved this story. I hope you continue with it and the characters as they seem like a great fit & destined for lots of new adventures.

5 stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Oh wow…..can’t wait to read pt2