All Comments on 'Princess Ch. 01'

I really dig the situation you have set you can go every witch way with this. i hope you will keep working on this story and i cant wait to find out what you come up with

This is a good begining to what I hope will be a long and enjoyable series. Keep writing Steve and I'll keep reading

..............but I loved it!

More please.

This has all sorts of possibilities. A little unbelievable, but still a great idea. You can make this as detailed as you want and I'll be looking forward to each installment. More, please!

I thought your previous stories were the best, but you keep topping them. You can really weave a tale. One request. Please write more. Write a book. ANYTHING! Thanks for giving us all great experiences, even if they are (mostly) fictional.

Great start to a HOT story...anxiously waiting for more!!!!!

So far, so good. Let's hope that the remainder of the story measures up to this chapter.

Very Roman Holiday, only with sex. Nice! I like the characters, even if our hero is kind of a pansy in the face of danger. Carrie is delightful. Keep it up, Steve.

Too wordy, we don't need to know that he crossed from the bar to the lobby elevators, and he turned here or there. I gave up before the end of the first page.

What happened to chapter 2, says five part story but jumps from chapter 01 to chapter 03, 04 and 05

Has it been deleted?

Chapter 2 has now disappeared and Chapter 7 (not linked to the other chapters) was visible yesterday and has disappeared today.

Loving it.

Where is Chapter 2?

HEY!!! Where's Chapter 2 ?!?!?

hey, i love your stories and wanted to read this series but hate to skip a missing chapter. Any chance you could get it re-posted?

Great start!

Delightful tale!

This needs to be a book, mass produced maybe in comic form with a decent skilled artist.