All Comments on 'Princess Ch. 07'

please go on

I like all of your tall tales and hope this will continue some...such possibilities!!!

Thank you for all you write. You can spin a tale with the best ever. Just awesome.

Thanks for a very very good story and thank you for and ending that is something most don't do on here keep up the good work

Would of scored higher, but it was missing chapter 02..

Prince George's Hospital Center is located in Bladensburg, MD; not College Park, MD. The closest hospital to College Park is Doctors' Community Hospital, in Lanham.

Missing chapter 2

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Too bad you got a bit political in this last chapter though.

-5*'s, you turned her into a SLUT! Him, a CUCKOLD..REALLY!

Nice story about alternate lifestyles but you mischaracterize both conservatives and the people in Oklahoma. Neither sets of people care about what or how people live unless it impinges on them. The obvious CRAP statements about both show nothing more than true ignorance and intolerance you want to preach, on either subject. Overall not a bad story but keep the crap statements out and that will improve the overall tone of the story. True polyamory is not about sticking it to anyone or any institution but rather living the life that is right for them.

She wants to be double teamed with another guy, she can find two other guys to do it with. She can also pack all her shit and go with them. Swinging, changing partners, whatever, she can do whatever she wants, just not with me any longer. Bye, bye Princess Caroline....

I enjoyed the story BUT! I handled the threesome completely but when it went to more---no way in hell!!!!!!!!! Shit like that can cause, even if wanted at first, trouble with people and relationship. I have tried telling myself """ it is only a story but it still does not work out to be good anyway you slice it. If you had stayed with the three of them all through the story, I would have thought a lot better of you. I gave you five stars but looking at it as I wrote, you should have gotten only three stars.

Steve, I’ve read eight of your stories now, I thought they were all great - sure the are fiction (I almost wish they were real). But please keep up the good work.

I am a fan of every story you have posted on this website. I am unsure what the exact reason for the quality of your stories to be so high. However, I do know that I have enjoyed every story you have published on this website and hope that there will be more to come! Your characters are so complete that you feel that they must be real. Beyond that, I can only say that I have never read any better stories on this website. Thank you, thank you, thank you. Please continue writing your stories. They are the best I have ever come across.

You sound like a female author, the princess being so empowered and allowed to be gangbanged. You should have ended the story with a dna test confirming if it is the lead males child or not

The story started out well as a love story but digressed into a fuck fest free for all and that ruined the love affair between Carrie and Jim. With all the sex partners she had and apparently she used no birth control, was she really sure that Jim was the father. I have to agree with Anon that a DNA test at the end would have at least confirmed the kid was in fact Jim's.

Would love to see more about these characters sometime.

Very imaginative and well planned story. I appreciated that the sex didn’t overwhelm the plot. I have to admit that it held my attention long enough to read the whole series at one sitting.

more chapters

Totally still nope. This had so much potential. And then failed miserably by skewing so far away from topic.

An excellent series, and one I'd love to see more of, especially the relationship between Emma and Doug.