by Wannabeboytoy
this is the best story that this site has ever seen- please dont change a thing- the wife should never know- i cant believe how hot the story is.
Priscilla is positively evil. I love her. Keep up the good work.
What an erotically fantasizing life! Fucking ones own wife without being able to knock her up with your kids, but at the same time fucking one's sister-in-law and giving her all your babies to the point that she wants you to and you give her her own separate house to live in so you can make more babies in here. What a dream!
This is one of the best and hottest story I've read in a while, your other work is excellent as well and I hope you keep writing.
I read both of your stories and found them to be very similar,so I got turned on TWICE. As a male (I hear wer'e sometimes described as having some of the same attributes as dogs in heat), it's nice once in a while to find that you've stepped in front of a runaway pleasure train, and there's nothing you can do about it. Sort of a "Hey, that really felt great, but I couldn't help myself, so it wasn't my fault" sort of thing. Feel free to conjure up endless repetitions of this scenario. You write them so well that: "Hey, it's not my fault I'm reading them" !!
This is almost like a reverse on the Loving Wife theme, call it Loving Husband. What does that make the wife, a cuck...?
Thanx
CW
It is too bad the sisters never learned to share. Of course now it would be a bad idea. Hmm... Maybe Sondra needs to meet a man that can do what her husband can't. Great story.
The writing pushes a lot of hot buttons. This story reminded me that my first wife had a step-sister (Patty) almost exactly like Pris in this story, so I got off on this story twice and I haven't even reached the end! Patty & I flirted around a lot, and she teasingly flashed me a few times, but we never went any further than that, so this story was like a fulfillment. What a nasty wicked sexy - and perfect - slut! Who could resist her? I vote for a sequel.
Yeah...that's me all over. Sondra reminds me of the poor dumbass cuckolded male version, who loves his wife and would never believe she could EVER cheat on him. How fucking pathetic can you get? Pricilla is the perfect female shitheel. And Matt? Another worthless male sterotype...the made of steel hero turned in to silly putty by the long sought-after, "golden pussy". Yet...viewed solely as an erotic romp...the story is a big winner! And yes, like a car wreck, totally repulsed, I eagerly await a sequel. I am such a whore-dog...
a really hot story- I'm sure there are millions of guys out there hanging out to meet their'priscilla'- could we please get another chapter in their saga,i'd like to read more of priscilla's controlling ways-GREAT writing, keep it up!!
To the commentor who wondered what that made Sondra, (an author whose name escapes me) wrote a story wherein the lady in question was a cuckqueen. I guess that's as good a title as any. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Oh my goodness! This has to be *the* best story I've ever read! Please give us more.
So many stories about seduction have the guys rollover faster than a well-trained puppy. Surely there are some guys out there, like the ones you write about, that take a lot of hard work!!!
Especially like how the guys in your stories are so nice and then changed into bastards.
Ever considered writing from a guy's p.o.v?
You have to return to writing this type of story. It is the best and I always come back to read it. Get back to the type writer and write more of this kind.
i only come back to this site to read your stories over and over again- write 20-30 more please.
PLEASE. im begging.
This has to be the hottest story i've read here. Its fantastic to read about a man actually putting up a fight before succumbing and for once not having the two sisters share. The description where he falls under her control has to be familiar to most blokes, that feeling of losing control when the girl knows exactly how to hold your cock, squeeze it or roll her tongue over it and you would happily do anything for her right there and then. This is the best and hottest ever!!!!!!
Fuck I stayed up late reading this I could get enough! Don't stop writing!
This is one hot story. Please continue it with the results of Pris having your twins. I would suspect that as soon as those twins are born that you will try for some siblings for them? You could make her sister totally crazy and then knock her up as well with want for your sperm, or even your cock. Maybe you can start making daughters with Pris so they can grow up and become Mommy(s) too, with you and have a son or two that can grow into manhood and fuck their Mommy and sisters and Aunty into pregnancy, too....keeping it all in the family for when your sperm gets all runny and non-existent into your piss?
great story if it wasn't for the cheating. this just pisses me off!
I don't like cheating, but, as you clearly stated in your bio, this is fantasy! Well written and very hot!
Mmm, Priscilla is such a hot little slut. Reminds me of my own sister-in-law. Now if I could just convincer her that she needs my dick...
Very good read!
I love this genre of stories. The fact Priscilla is someone she trusts and her sister just makes it all that much more hotter. The wedding dress seemed like a bit much but a good symbol lol. Hope you make more. I'll be looking for them! Great job!
Hey, maybe Sondra can start secretly getting your sperm when Pris' belly gets too big to fuck her....
God, I love it. I never get tired of Matt fucking that hot slut Priscilla. Give her more. Give us more.
I agree wounderfull story of deception and drama. Getting the sister to turn the tables would be aswsome
Not really getting the sister to turn the tables would be like ever other storie, the whole sister getting her justice(not very exciting, more like boring with a capital B. Having Prissy as the main in this storie makes it so much more then a normal boring read. Plue's the danger of getting caught make's it all the more sexier, at least that's what i think! by the way "Wannabeboytoy" i can't wait till u up date this storie, i'm just dieing to read more of this mouth watering storie!
i love it!!! i always read this and get so hottt... you should write another chapter!
Reminds of my real life experience.most memorable but I dont want that again
love the story so much, its funny and hot as hell.
please put a a nother chapter to it, i wanna kno if lil sis ever found out. yay...hehe
love this one - one of the best stories
Great work.. I think more focus on Priscilla as the main charater would be better. But I like your descriptions and wording. The end seemed alittle rushed like you didnt want it to go one to another chapter or just wanted it to end.. I think a series of this would be great draw out the pregnancy and there sneaking around. All in a I like it!
I don't know why you stopped writing. This is the best story I have ever read.
Dude, this story is awesome, and i agree with all of the comments below, especially teh one about priscilla being the main character.
you are saying this idiot makes 400,000.00 a year and he is letting a dumbass bimbo ruin his life you forget you maded his wife a lawyer youi sound like you are not to smart lousy story lousy author
hahaha you got parts of your story from My Wife's Mother: Cathy & Me
good take on this scenario though............
Great story, very hot premise, but don't you think some of the dirty talk is a little ridiculous? It's hard not to laugh when Priscilla says "Give me your hot spunk!" No woman, no matter how slutty she is, says anything like that. That's just one example.
I must agree with the comments above. i find myself coming back to this story every time I'm on the site. Please write more
the husband is such a weak dumbass, it's disgusting. it started somewhat promising, but i really don't like how the story proceeded with matt and priscilla
not incest...husband is pathetic, Prissy is nastier then a slut...i wish Sondra took them all for everything amd left them homeless...nothing good or hot in this story
I love everything about this story. It kept me engaged and wet the entire time. Great plot!!
the beginning of the story explains why Matt wouldn't go for Priscilla, if he was really in love with his wife and respected her independence and fidelity to him, he wouldn't let Priscilla linger around their marriage. This has the cliche hallmarks of oh the wife is busy working and earning her fair share of money while the conniving slut sister, steals the husband away. Considering the other sister is a lawyer, she would literally fucking bankrupt this idiot and he and priscilla would be up shit's creek without a paddle as sondra would legit walk away with all the money. Also who would invest in matt again after he basically went from good upstanding husband to a cheating piece of shit dude, investors want honesty and character, not a dude whose stupid enough to throw it all away on a piece of ass. It's a hot fantasy piece but in no way realistic, a dude making 400k a year married to a lawyer would never throw it all away like this, also his wife would pick up on it. Women are natural lie detectors, try to cheat on your gf or wife in real life and see how long it is before you are on the street and broke from either her rage at you or all your money goes to them through divorce court.
I wonder if the author had any idea when he wrote this long ago that a 44 band size doesn't mean 'nice rack' like he apparently thinks it does. No, that means she has a lot of fat under the wrinkled skin surrounded her overweight torso. In short, she's a fat cow with 44DD's, instead of the sexy baby she could have been as a 34DD, with ten inches less fat around her upper midsection. Ugh.
(8/6/2023) The sentence structure in the beginning was way off and I thought that English may not have been this author's first language. The structure got better as the story went on but it became redundant and predictable. Wrong genre. It was more of a Mind control or reluctance story. The characters had no depth, IMO. The wife was a lawyer and the hubby an entrepreneur. So I guess the slutty sister-in-law had a magic pussy that lowered their IQs by 50 points. This was not a good read at all for me.